Marrow Heat

Marrow Heat

A Poem by MichelleSun
"

We need Love from the marrow of our bones...

"

 
Marrow Heat

Sleep Less

 

Find your Feet

Eat Less

Marrow Love

 

Love More

For and For and For and For

Those in need

             Give the Gift

Seeds of Seeds

              Almost the width

 

Wide Beyond

      The Atmosphere

Marrow Heat

Needed Here

 

Warm to Love

        Love Them More

For and For and For and For

         Lifetimes on

Give the Gift

 

Marrow Love

       Not the width

Or Beyond What He does

 

None beyond the Creator’s Love

 

Marrow Heat

 

More Time

Less Fear

 

Marrow Heat Needed Here

 

 

 

 

 

 

© 2008 MichelleSun


Author's Note

MichelleSun
This was kind of... a cry for help...

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The design factor here...the shortness of the words...as you present them...to me the words are like quick flash cards to the reader...quick in pace and development...the piece seems to stem more on a personal level by your usage of meaning...

Posted 8 Years Ago


this is beautiful. I like it keep up the great work girlfriend.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is nice. We do all need just that.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on May 10, 2008
Last Updated on June 7, 2008

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MichelleSun
MichelleSun

Stone Mountain, GA



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I have been through it all but, GLORY to GOD, I am still HERE! more..

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