time

Time...

It drives me insane

I never have enough time

It doesn't help to complain

So i play pretend games,my favorite one is "im fine"

I can tell you im drowning,falling,breaking

 but i don't have the time to waste 

So iI cook a meal of hopes and dreams,you ask what im making?

Ill make a dessert of positivity with happiness as the paste 

And when it comes out a flop,burnt to ashes

Ill answer by saying,

 "this is why I don't try,coz everything just crashes"

No  point in praying

Time I don't have much

Time drives me insane

But life is like such

So there is no point to complain

Reviews

[Robert]

Very well penned Micky, it has a good rhyme to it and I like reading and writing about time and you did it so well here.

[micky]

Thank you for your kind words :) Robert

[Michael Stevens]

Time is a dish served constantly, is it not, and this comment is a pointless waste, that you probably don't have time to waste on a reply--no, so true!

[micky]

lol thanks for the review:)

[Michael Stevens]

I'm glad you found the revue humorous!

[Beth Shade]

Amen and well put^^ very well put^^

[micky]

Thank you for your kind words :)

[Beth Shade]

no problem thank you for posting^^

[Saddam]

Time I don't have much
Time drives me insane
But life is like such
So there is no point to complain

Beautifully express the truth, but sometimes it bring back our time.

[micky]

thank you :)

[marcus]

Sometimes, things feel this way!

[micky]

thank you:)

[Abilash Uttama]

we never get enough time, there is no benefit in complaining. nice poem :)

[micky]

thank you :)

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree dear Poet.
"Time I don't have much
Time drives me insane
But life is like such
So there is no point to complain"
Time is very valuable. Old age had taught me. Don't waste time on useless things. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[micky]

Thank you Coyote for the view

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[alf]

Hi micky. Feeling your pain here!!! At times, it can be like that. the feeling you have not caught up even though you fill in time with useless tasks!! This is a really raw write, but this is what you do so very well!!
I am crushed by the hopelessness you feel each time you write. keep writing my friend, for it waill pass . . . and become a little easier, a bit at a time!! alf

[micky]

Thank you Alf for the kind words....:)

[AaronFreitas]

Time is our own worst natural enemy my friend. Nothing we can do to change it. Stay strong my friend and you always know I'm here for you :)

[micky]

Thank you so much Aaron for the review and for being a great friend:) hugs to you

[Ashwin Thakur]

You are always behind time
Nice poem micky....

[micky]

thank you :)