Not Making A Sound

Not Making A Sound

A Poem by *Evelen*

This Feeling that I hide from you

That chokes my heart inside

I wish I could find the words

Instead of just letting you walk on by

These emotions that are choking

These feelings that are stirring

Everything I ever thought

Is now only of you

Hating myself for falling

Even though I know you'd miss me

Letting my heart hit the ground

And watching it fall apart without a sound

I'm not going to fight the way I feel

I'm not going to let my heart heal

Not if it's going to break again

For just another fake.

© 2010 *Evelen*

Author's Note

Please tell me what you think of this, and how it makes you feel. I'm sorry that I'm not that good yet, but hopefully I'll get better. Thank You for reading this. I hope you like it.

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This is a good flow. There's a rhyme scheme, but it doesn't feel forced, which is always nice. I like the structure of it as well. This is good, nice job.

Posted 12 Years Ago

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