Some Of Us

Some Of Us

A Poem by *Evelen*

Everyone wonders why they can't find love

Some us actually think that we found love

Some of us have never been broken

And a lot of us don't know how it feels to be whole

Most of us have fallen

And some of us are smart enough to stay standing

A lot of us have learned to let go

While the rest of us are struggling to hold on

A small amount of us have given up completly

The rest just keep wondering why they can't

Some of us cry every night

While the rest are holding on to him tight

A tiny piece of me still loves the way he smiles

And every bit of me needs to see his face

Yet at the same time I push him away

To afraid to admit that I still love him

Hoping that I will get over him one day

© 2010 *Evelen*

Author's Note

Thank you guys for reading! Please ignore my grammar and such.

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Hey this one is great really liked it and felt your emotions :0 very nice way of writing this one :)

Posted 11 Years Ago

Wow. Your poem really spoke to me. I get where all of it can be based on everyone and then at the same time, based on you or me or bob down the street. I like how you used polar opposites to show how love is universal. Really great!

Posted 12 Years Ago

I like the structure of this, how the text starts out large, then becomes smaller. Good flow, great write.

Posted 12 Years Ago

Wow...this is really good...the flow of it is very nice...and it is true there is so many ppl out there going through all of these.
Great Job :)

Posted 12 Years Ago

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Added on April 15, 2009
Last Updated on January 3, 2010



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