Fire.

Fire.

A Poem by *Evelen*

     Sometimes I'm too afraid to get to closer to the fire. Afraid to take  one more step forward for I might get burned.Too shy... Too timid to welcome the warm light.

 Other times I walk into the fire forgetting the past, and fall to deep into it.                      Then when I realize exactly what I'm doing. It's to late, and I end up being hurt even more than last time.

© 2010 *Evelen*


Author's Note

*Evelen*
Eh.

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This is a better look at those dangerous excursions into relationships than most. Comparing love to fire is not so uncommon, but this comaprison (being too timid to walk into the fire or doing so knowlingly) has a different slant. I like what I see here. but suggest cleaning up the 'to' and 'too' issue. :-)

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on October 17, 2009
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*Evelen*
*Evelen*

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