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A Poem by *Evelen*

 

I’m jealous

For every girl

That you kissed

For every girl

That you hugged

For every girl

That you loved

 

I’m pissed

For every girl

That hurt you

For all the lies

That you were told

For all the times

That you found out

You were cheated

 

I’m sad

When you’re sad

When you’re hurt

When you are unsure

When you’re scared

When you’re worried

 

I’m lost

As soon as

You say goodbye

On the phone

The second you leave

The moments

I’m not with you

 

I’m happy

When I hear

Your name

When I hear

Your voice

When I see

Your smile

And I know

I’m the one

That put it there

I’m just happy

When I’m with

You.

I guess I’m just in love.  

© 2010 *Evelen*


Author's Note

*Evelen*
=) Hope you liked it =)

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That is very cute and very true about love (or at least infatuation). I like how you show the different feelings that you feel and why you feel them. The way you broke up the poem is fantastic. Great job!

Posted 14 Years Ago


now this one is very well put together and is just plain amazing! i enjoyed this read I thought it had perfect flow!

Posted 14 Years Ago



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