CLose Your Eyes...

CLose Your Eyes...

A Poem by *Evelen*

Close your eyes

 And count to ten

Ignore the stares

And just keep thinking

That soon you’ll be

With him

 

Everything is fine

Just close your eyes

And count to nine

Remember all

The good times

And all the memories

You’ve created

 

Everything is great

Just close your eyes

And count to eight

Remember all the

Things he’s promised

And all the secrets

That  were told

 

Everything is like heaven

Just close your eyes

And count to seven

Daydreaming about him all day

Just you and him all alone

In such a perfect world

 

Everything will soon be fixed

Just close your eyes

And count to six

The pain is over whelming you

Just picture that smile

On his handsome face

And there!  

Everything is better

 

Just go along with the vive

And close your eyes

And count to five

Remember the

 Tingling sensation you get

Every time you kiss

Every time you touch

 

Without him

Life is such a bore

Close your eyes  

And count to four

Remember all the fun times

You had with him

And laugh as his voice

Replays in your head

Bringing life back in your eyes

 

Think about the one you want to see

So close your eyes

And count to three

Quickly his face fills your mind

His eyes breath taking

His smile o so handsome

 

Now you see your boo

And you’re not even able

To close your eyes

And count to two

You’ve missed him so much

And now he’s here

Jump into his arms

And stay there

 

Lay down next to him in the sun

And close your eyes

And count to one

Enjoy this moment

That you can’t have everyday

Just take it all in

And kiss him again

 

Close your eyes

 For one last time

These moments

Aren’t even worth

A single dime

But to you

They are worth

So much more

To you these moments

Are worth the world

Just hold him tight

For one last time…

And let your heart soar

© 2010 *Evelen*


Author's Note

*Evelen*
I hope you like it ^-^

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I enjoyed it very much =D
The build up the counting down created, it really pulls the reader in.
Amazing write, keep it up! =P

Posted 13 Years Ago


i really liked it!!! Great poem!!! Cool thing with the counting down!!!

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on January 31, 2010
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*Evelen*
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