Even if you want to save me

 

Break my heart

And together we will watch

As it slowly falls apart

With your arms wrapped around me

And my eyes glued to the scene

As I watch my heart shatter

Not letting you leave

To save me

This pain seems friendly

This pain is seducing

As it wraps around my heart

As it breaks it apart

Enveloping my feelings completely

Comforting me

Breaking me

It all seems the same to me

I start to feel hallow

I start to feel numb

Your arms tighten around me

Trying to show me that your there

To protect me

But I’m too numb

 Too fascinated by this pain

To notice that your there besides me

Willing to protect me

My eyes seem to wonder

To the pieces on the ground

I feel my heart hurt

Yet I don’t make a sound

My eyes become weary

As I remember the memories

That over whelm my mind

That I tried to push back

This whole time

You kiss my cold lips

Trying to warm them up

But I don’t notice

That warm feeling

Too use to breaking

To notice

That you truly love me

That you truly want to protect me

You’re hoping that I’ll move on

To get past this feeling

To start healing

But I can’t make promises

That I know I might not keep

My heart will always be broken

Even if you’re willing

To save me

Author's Note

Hope you like. Thanks for reading.

Reviews

[Mioki]

This piece carries strong personal emotion, and I like that very much. There's a few parts that seem a bit restricted though, as if there's something beeing held back. Try not worrying about the structure, and let the words flow out. ;)

Besides that, everything else shines wonderfully. The heartbreak, and the way you've described it, really makes the reader feel moved. By displaying these emotions, you've created a good piece here. I'm very glad to have read~

[DeadToTheWorld]

Wow!! I like this it made me remember something about my first boyfriend and how it made me feel I loved it I always love poem's that remind me of something from my past :)

~ TheGothicHatter