Shine bright

Wrote this for my great grandma

You shine bright in the dark midnight sky,
With tiny dancing stars across the sky,
Shinning bright like a big moon,
There's no place where I wouldn't want to be,
Without you.

You shine bright,
With your amazing smile,
Knowing that your always right by,
Filling up the sky,
With shinning stars.

You shine bright like the midnight sky,
Full of bright shinning stars,
I know your up there,
Someplace,
Just shinning your love to us.

You're the bright star outside my,
Bedroom window,
You just shine bright not moving,
Only there in the dark midnight sky,
No where else.

Just in the midnight sky,
Looking down at us,
Watching us,
Just the big bright star,
Shine bright.
I miss you gogo

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[Trollarch Inc.]

This is the best poem that I have ever
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[Perri]

Shinning=shining, your up there=you're up there, nowhere is one word.
Very sweet...I'm sure she was a wonderful lady =)