a study into the space they decorate with one another.

a study into the space they decorate with one another.

mikl paul

 

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the breath was never yours yet

    as the light divides   the room

 they fill   it fills     and if it was

   ever     theirs     they feel    removed

from   the source of their   selves

   and they   goodmorning goodmorning

light   we love you.  while the scenery

   shards their pressing    exposing

the raw path  until.    they may reconcile

   the light   the  self     but without a

tremor of unexcused happiness or 

    a brief witness  of how gorgeous

is the way into   tremor  and  when

  you repeat what you have  seen&heard

  how wide will your arms open to

  describe   a form of living   a

 beam   a   blanket cast how far.

 

Reviews

[barton smock]

while the scenery
shards their pressing exposing
the raw path until.

(unique phrasing, but without forfeiting the local. simply feels uncovered as opposed to created.)

[mikl paul]

thank you for taking the time to read.

[John Destalo]

Wonderful exploration of life, living, light, space, and growing together apart. Like the repeating goodmorning and then saying "repeat" as well as the "way into tremor."

[mikl paul]

thank you John!