Dreams are our life

Are my dreams just a fantasy land,

that crumbles away like sand?

My dreams may be strange, but you yourself are not a sage

Dreams are our future they help us realize our life

You can't cut them in half like a knife

I help myself into an indulge of happiness

I won't let myself drown in sorrowfulness

I promised my loved ones dreams do come true

Don't deny it because we know the way too

We can't help it if we have bigger dreams

We depend on one another, soon creating teams

All I know is that I have a future with me in it

I won't sit all day in my own little pit

I won't just look around and sit all day

We all have a life to live, don't you say

 

Reviews

[yuki]

my opinion would be (if you want) is to change ''cut them in half like a knife'' to cut them in half with a knife.'' but otherwise its a very beautiful poem.