Alone In Malmo

Alone In Malmo

A Poem by Doug
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here's an example of a poem with concrete nouns in every line

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She forgot black eyeliner was still on

While taking off knee high socks

To walk across the winter cold floor,

Hoping hallway lights won’t wake him

Into late night breast groper.

The bedroom walls look blue

As she slides under a white comforter.

She misses closed dorm days

When Patrick still shaved his beard

And would notice club night make up.

© 2008 Doug


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Added on April 6, 2008

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Doug
Doug

Sacramento, CA



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One night while I was asleep I had the words, "Veni, Vidi, Vici" repeating in my head. All night this happened. I want to somehow use this creatively. I feel like it was a sign to use it for some s.. more..

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