Failure

I am losing at this game of life,

I have been knocked off the game board,

replaced.

I didn’t cross the finish line,

I came in last.

I am running from myself,

afraid to look behind me.

I am in denial.

I failed.

Reviews

[ANNA]

You should put in:
I didn't cross the finish line, (to collect my $200 dollars) lol
You made me what to read this over n over
Amazing write!!

Much love n respect,
Anna

[J.Black]

Haha so I bet I inspired you with this one! Looks like you failed and I won this time. Don't worry, you'll pick yourself up and win, I'm sure of it.

[fotini]

this reminds me the story of my life.....
yeah,life sucks...!
very nicely written!!!!

[bluessadmood]

that was so nice ,so sad ,no you are never failing in life..
i do not think there is really any failiure..
there is just the lucky and the unlucky..
the dreamer and the one who never dreams
the one with a big heart and the one with the black
all those on the left are winners ,the others very well known these are the losers
this was so written nice ..gave me lots to think..well done