First Kiss

I inhale as you lean into me,

my heart pounds with excitement,

while my brain screams anxiously,

I feel my pulse quicken through my body,

inside I explode,

my breathing shortens,

heat flushes through me,

this is the moment that I’ve been waiting for.

You brush your lips softly against mine...

So this is what it feels like?

Amazing.

Reviews

[J.Black]

My first kiss was a total mess. I think I was 12 and I recall having my eyes open for the first 30 seconds of it because I had no clue what was going on and I honestly remember after it was over, I inhaled a huge breathe due to all the oxygen I lost. I honestly did hold my breathe, I was so nervous and shocked and omg being in love at 12 is so funny!!! Nice though Amy cause you just described a poet kiss like Bluessadmood said!
anways lover, you describe it all so well, except mine if I were ever to describe it, would be a little different. ;) Haha!

[bluessadmood]

oh how sweet ..a poet kiss..i could never say it better..inhale you into me..heart pounds ..brain screams..pulse quickens ..and i explode inside..short breath ..heart flush..as lips sweeps soft against each..
what wonderful words..