Hate

Hate

A Poem by Amy

I hate that you’re never around,

that you always pick a fight.

I hate that you never admit that you’re wrong,

and think that you’re always right.

 

I hate that you think you’re so hot,

thinking that you can get everything that you desire.

I hate how you can easily fool me,

and how you set my heart on fire.

 

I hate how you tempt me,

playing this lovers game.

I hate that you’ll never change your ways,

yet I’m the one to blame?

 

I hate how you never reach for my hand,

instead you’d rather play with my heart.

I hate how you never tell me how much you miss me,

it tears me apart.

 

I hate staring into your eyes,

knowing that all you do is lie.

I hate it when you say hello,

because I know you really mean goodbye.

 

I hate how much I love you.

I hate how much I care.

I hate how much I need you.

I hate how you’re never there.

 

I hate that you’re blind to all of this.

I hate that you pretend that you can’t see.

I hate that you can’t hear,

and that you love her instead of me.

© 2009 Amy


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Damn Amy! You on fiiiiiiiire girl! Okay, so I can relate to the lines of: "I hate that you can't hear,
and that you love her instead of me." Yep, so this was sheer brilliant and basically, now to conclude we woman know what we want in life, and out of our men, and half of them are confused. Hate is a strong word, but despise is even harsher. Currently, you know you still love him, it's the game he plays you hate. Lol.

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This is ever so heartbreaking I can feel the emotion in this, also well stated.

Posted 15 Years Ago


I can totally relate to this, as I'm sure many girls can. There's lots of things we hate about the guy we dont or cant have, especially when he has someone else. Powerful kabam! That's how I'll put it :)

Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Oh God this is fabulous but the end is really heartbreaking, i thought it was going a different way... amazing and powerful write.

Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Damn Amy! You on fiiiiiiiire girl! Okay, so I can relate to the lines of: "I hate that you can't hear,
and that you love her instead of me." Yep, so this was sheer brilliant and basically, now to conclude we woman know what we want in life, and out of our men, and half of them are confused. Hate is a strong word, but despise is even harsher. Currently, you know you still love him, it's the game he plays you hate. Lol.

Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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