No

I finally have the strength to leave you,

the strength to let go,

he power to run from you,

the courage to say no.

 

No more lonely nights,

of crying myself to sleep,

no more thoughts of wondering,

my soul is mine to keep.

 

And when I wake up the next day,

you will no longer be around,

I no longer have to listen to you,

you and your pathetic sound.

 

Goodbye to all the tears,

all the blood that I’ve lost,

the painful memories,

and times of paying the cost.

 

No to all of your pressures,

no to all of your horrible mistakes,

no to everything about you,

no to nothing great.

 

As I walk away I will walk with perfect confidence,

don’t even ask why,

for I know that I’m worth it,

because to me you’re just another guy.

Reviews

[bluessadmood]

no more to lonely nights..no more no cry..no thoughts wondering..my soul is all mine
time i am strong to leave..strong to run..will start say no..
bye tears..no more
blood i lost ..aching memories..times i paid the cost..bye bye
no ..no more of your mistakes..nothing about you ..ever great
and i walk away ..never ask me why
i know i am worth a lot..but you was always just someone i once knew
lovely write ,nice to be able to say no..ha ha

[M. Amphet Salt]

Bravo! All I can say is a strong piece.

he power to run from you (he - The)

[Nick Rueb]

This was very powerful and heartfelt. I like that you have your head up high by the end. Good stuff.

[J.Black]

"As I walk away I will walk with perfect confidence,

don't even ask why,

for I know that I'm worth it,

because to me you're just another guy."

Alex is a mushroom head. He's clearly on something that f*****g with his brain if he can't notice how awesome you are!

[sheerpoetry]

you should write a pt 2 about all the things you said yes to for yourself by saying no to him. I liked it

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

I really love the inner strength and confidence you show know you are worth so much more then the heartache you were given... Now when you move on to something better he will be kicking himself with regret.

[just is]

As I walk away I will walk with perfect confidence,
don't even ask why,
for I know that I'm worth it,
because to me you're just another guy.

I love your closing lines here, It shows strength, this is a well written write, this just flows.

[---]

very well written!

I can feel the pain that was in you before, and now it has been released.

Great job! Don't ever stop writing.

~Phoenix~

[Frank F. Atanacio]

Bravo-- I'm applauding this write--well penned!!!!