A Silent Reverie

Just figured I'd try writing some lyrics! =) It turned a little Linkin Parkish .... but oh well! They're still a great band, too!

"A Silent Reverie"

 

Twisted in this demented melody,

I find myself wondering where I should be.

Faces are fading, places are changing

Accomodate, alternate, I've revolutionized into a tranquil state.

 

Alone in this world, I feel so cold

Everything's spinning, can't grab a hold.

Lost all sanity, I'm stuck in this reverie

 Too weary to retreat from this sanctuary of peace.

 

You won't see what this life really holds for me

In your eyes, everything is copacetic

But your ignorance has made me f*****g apethetic

 

Inside I'm dying, I can't keep trying

To make the pain fade away, I'm done begging you to stay

 

I'm alone in this world, but now I don't feel so cold

Everything's spinning, but I finally got a hold.

I found my sanity, so f**k your reverie

I'm breaking free of this misery to find my own inner peace.

 

 

 

© Bunnie 2009

Reviews

[melissa]

yes sound like Linkin Park great job girl i loved it!!!!!!:)

[Angel Veselinov]

Great Read. Good Rhymes also very good message to get over someone and find the peace for yourself :)

[Psynexus]

Nice. After you said "Linkin Park" I had a melody going on in my head. ^_^

The "song" flows well and works without needing any structure to follow. I thought it was gonna go one way and it went another seamlessly. My only question is what's the back-story - what inspired it?

Well done, it was a pleasure to read something from my favorite author again. ;)