Morning

An attempt to micropoetry

Leaving dreamworld 

Facing reality

Here comes a new morning...

Reviews

[mattavelli]

It's small. Are there rules for writing micropoetry?

[Mitali Shah]

Yes Matt. Its also known as tweetku, twihaiku, twaiku, or twitter poetry. You have to describe in 140 characters just like you do it for Twitter posts. :)

[mattavelli]

Does that includes spaces?
I've never seen twitter. Haha

[Coyote Poetry]

You told a real story in so few words. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Mitali Shah]

Thank you so much Coyote :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Sami Khalil]

Crafted like the new morning. Excellent in its brevity...:).........................

[Mitali Shah]

Thanks Sami :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome. ...:)......

[Chirag Kumar]

The feeling everyone goes through after waking up. Wish the dreamworld was itself the reality ;) Loved it

[Mitali Shah]

thank you so much Chirag :) God bless

[Jamestown]

Well written,
beautifully described
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Mitali Shah]

Thank you so much Jamestown :) God bless

[wordman]

well this is a perfect layout of my morning,except i don`t usually remember my dreams

[Mitali Shah]

Yep Wordman many times it hapens.,thanks for checking out.

[Pratik Mishra]

Perfectly expressed in 3 lines! :)

[Mitali Shah]

Thank you so much Pratik :) God bless

[Robert]

A new morning is always good. Nice writing Mitali.

[Mitali Shah]

Thank you so much Robert :)

[ANTO]

I never heard the term micro-poetry before Mitali but I guess I've read a lot of pieces on here that would fall into that category.
It is sometimes hard to leave some of those dreams - others...nah... not so much
but they wouldnt be special if they weren't transient.
You captured the regret but between the lines the magic of our other realm.
Thanks for sharing.

[Mitali Shah]

Thanks ANTO :) God bless

[AaronFreitas]

Nice... sometimes it's much better living in our dreams. Reality isn't as fun... good work :)

[Mitali Shah]

Well said Aaron. Thanks for appreciating.