Game of Fate

Life is all about twists and turns

 

Her cheeks were shying red yesterday

Today they are reddened with blood

 

Vermillion on her forehead

Replaced by blood tonight

 

Flowers for first night

Turned out to be garland for coffin

 

Moans of passion

Redressed by mourns of revenge

 

Sheets were stained

But she was missing

 

Tears of happiness

Turn into tears of sad farewell

 

Red and green bangles on her wrists

Turned out to be iron handcuffs of his wrists

 

Bright lights in the room

Followed by dim

 

Replacing love story

Into worst nightmare

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

My first collabration with Chirag Kumar. Please share your views.

http://www.writerscafe.org/archive2194 [Chirag's Profile]

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A sad story in the poetry. Sweet dreams turn to pain and suffering.
"Red and green bangles on her wrists
Turned out to be iron handcuffs of his wrists"
Thank you for sharing the poem. A great effort of two writers.
Coyote

[Mitali Shah]

Thanks Coyote for the appreciation :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.

[Rajat malik]

This is a sad one Mitu....
And in short words only it speaks something deep.....Thanks for sharing

[Mitali Shah]

Thanks Rajat :)

[Chirag Kumar]

Thanks Mitali for posting our work :)

[Mitali Shah]

Your welcome :)

[mattavelli]

I liked it. Mitali, you write a lot about dangerous love. I hope your life is more peaceful.

[Mitali Shah]

Haha yep Matt trying to explore the new facets of my writing. Thank you so much :)

[AaronFreitas]

Awesome collaboration :) I loved the descriptions in this write... two awesome writers, good job both of you :)

[Mitali Shah]

Thank you so much Aaron :)

[Robert]

This has such a twist to it Mitali, you and Chirag did a splendid job with this piece, Bravo!

[Mitali Shah]

Thank you so much Robert :)

[wordman]

captured in a life she did not choose,sad,great colab

[Mitali Shah]

Thank you so much Wordman :)

[Braden Freeman]

It is very well written, but hard to read. I am not as fond of sad stories.

[Mitali Shah]

Glad to know dear that you liked it. Thanks for reading :)

[Jamestown]

Well penned!
I just wrote a very similar piece myself :)
You version of life's twist and turns is fantastic,
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Mitali Shah]

Thank you so much James :)