Shinee

I'm once a fan of Shinee. And in this poem, some of Shinee's songs are found.

I'm in my room.

Wishing for my Shinee girl to come true.

Oh, where are you?

My lífe is so blue.

 

You're my obsession.

My beautiful Juliette.

Just stand by me,

And our life will be romantic.

 

When we're far apart,

Our love should go on

I need a replay,

Cause I can't move on.

 

My electric heart is beating,

Because of you.

Be my Shinee girl forever,

Cause I love you. 

Author's Note

Enjoy :)

Reviews

[TheCreativityItself]

@Kuhr Gred you indeed helped Guitar Heroine. I logged in and the first thing I saw were three reed requests. I have also read two other poems... Maybe this poem is better written, I liked your style of writing more of you poem 'Music'


keep on writing!

[Guitar Heroine]

thank you, this was written last year, haha, when i'm still a kpop lover :) just inspired

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Simple love poem well constructed

[Guitar Heroine]

thank you, stay tune for more. haha :)

[Coyote Poetry]

A very good poem. I like the thoughts and the desire of the poem. Good to appreciate things we hold special alive in our mind and heart.
"I need a replay,
Cause I can't move on."
Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Guitar Heroine]

haha, if only we can REPLAY all our mistakes. thank you too! i'll try to write more, stay tune :D

[Poppie Mira]

"My electric heart is beating," lovely line!!!

[Guitar Heroine]

haha! thank you :)

[Kuhr Gred]

I really.. enjoy this.. haha i will help you to get more reviews .. you'll see.. :)
- Kuhr gred

[Guitar Heroine]

wow, haha! thanks, di pa ako mrunong dito eh :3