surrender under gypsy stardust ~

surrender under gypsy stardust ~

A Poem by Frieda P

shorelines met the heavens

surrendered under gypsy stardust,
   our dance an inflamed kiss 
skies impassioned the intensity
  of fervent moonbeam's heated embrace
filled my wildest aching desires
   within your ardor's fiery captivation
enthralling an enchanted sunset's obscurity
     knees went weak in a zealous fulfilled sunrise,
sensation's of endmost satiated gusto,
   shorelines met the heavens in exquisite divinity
breathless in the glory of worlds imploding,
  chanted to the gods on wind's splendor
rode the dark stallion until the
           resplendent bliss of night burst forth
                                 in contented ecstasy 

© 2014 Frieda P

Author's Note

Frieda P

Andrew Atroshenko ~ Gypsy Painting

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oooooooh back to the heat and spice that you do so well.. yum.... but you knew I would be melting all over this one... they sensual rhythm of the music mirrors the erotic dance of nature as it prepares for the naughty magic of the night.. love it... the word choice again is so deliciously sexy and palpable as it reaches out and tingles in all the right places... oooh yes ma'am.. lovely.. bliss... :)

Posted 5 Years Ago

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Frieda P

5 Years Ago

Ooooh la la, another sweet review, gotta love when nature gets naughty. ;) Thanks so much April. :)

5 Years Ago

Yes ma'am. Indeed.. As always, my pleasure :)

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amazing writing, an absolute delight to read.

Posted 3 Years Ago

liked every word of it.

Posted 3 Years Ago

Fabulous write you have here Frieda.

Posted 5 Years Ago

Fabulous one. For long time remembrance. Great as always.

Posted 5 Years Ago

I must say that this certainly captured my attention. You have such a clever and unique style all your own.

Posted 5 Years Ago

You never cease to amaze me, Friedalicious....

....moving and captivating at the same time...

I love how this passion burns through the night!

Truly stunning!~xoxo~:)

Posted 5 Years Ago

The title captured me as well! I enjoy the musical addition as well as the choice of words. It immediately brought imagery to my mind

Posted 5 Years Ago

Frieda P. your words sing and I listen and I smile. This poem was beautiful but the little caption under the title, " shorelines met the heavens" was just perfect. Maybe an old word but your poetry is charming to me. I really enjoyed this today.

Posted 5 Years Ago

somehow you made love to the sky with a sensation of words the gorgeous picture you paint of nature, beautiful.

Posted 5 Years Ago

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Added on August 4, 2014
Last Updated on August 4, 2014


Frieda P
Frieda P


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