Full Moon

The days are long

they come and don't go for a long while

they leave and send dark into its place

dark pours over the lonely road

the homes and other things

the pierce of the stars

twinkling over head

the full moon

shining out over the water

the water reflecting

the waves so tempting

the earth in orbit

traveling the sun

the planets around us

are raging on

the hollow sound of morning

comeing to a bloom

starting the day

that is so very long

Reviews

[Dan Bullock]

Why is the day so long for you?

I do question that but it doesn't take away from the visuals I see and feel here, I'm there, watching the ripples of the water and the mystic of the moon!

:)

[Jinx's Heart]

Very flowing and naturalistic. Very nice imagery and soothing tone. Very nice.

[Call me Jane]

DO you like MOONS???? I love moons