Rain

I love to watch the rain

it falls, falls to the earth in silence

shatters to the dirt

feeds the plants of many

fills the ocean, blue as the sky

creates a perfecrt day to cry

all the tears hidden from view

I walk through myself and back again

but I'm still not sure just who I am

I watch the rain just so I know

I'm not the only sorry soul

Reviews

[Lizanne]

Beautifull work. I loved every word of it. "Falls to the earth in silence, shatters to the dirt." You describe exactly how a drop of rain looks when it hits a solid object. Shatters like glass. A very thoughtful observance. "Creates the perfect day to cry..all the tears hidden from view." If you need to cry that is the best time walking in the raining. You can even stop and chat with someone and they are none the wiser. The part I love the most is "I walk through myself and back again...but I'm still not sure just who I am." A lot of deep soul searching. You are a gifted writer. Keep the good work flowing!

[Bull Dog]

Great Write, I love rain. Cool Beans!

[Gheeneil]

Rain could be so comforting. The sight and the sound could soothe a troubled soul. I like the simplicity of it.

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Congrats on your great winning poem

[beefjerky]

this poem is good, the rain makes eberything blue in a good way...

[Gregory Hill]

hmm pretty good, you spelled perfect wrong though

[J. Alexis Balaguer]

Simple in so many amazing ways.
What great views on a rain, truly captivating insights.

My favorite lines:
fills the ocean, blue as the sky
creates a perfect day to cry

Great read Queen!
Punishment

[Tara Murasaki]

Great poem, I especially like the very last line. I think this poem really expresses what many of us feel on rainy days.

[Bear]

Me too, love to watch, listen to, walk in ~~ the rain. Use to splash in the puddles once the rain had ceased but, then I was 6 and was having fun. I should try that again one day... splashing in the puddles just for fun.

Sorry soul? Nah, not thee no sorry soul captures their thoughts so well upon the page.

[Phenomena]

I really like how this poem is as if it were the definition of rain. But then again I also like how you reversed it into explaining the "definition," to explaining how rain also is a day of sadness. Awesome write!=D

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Great Write!