Why am I the one always getting mucked

Why am I the one always getting mucked

A Poem by M Lamont
"

For the "Muck It" contest

"

I try my best

I try real hard

But I always seem to be delt

The muck it card

 

I look forward to more

Of this crazy hand

I fear I am becoming

A twisted muck it fan

 

So muck me now

And maybe muck me twice

I am on a muck it roll

With this mucked up life

 

Written by: Mark Lamont

August 2008

© 2008 M Lamont


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Fantastic piece...I love how the word 'muck' appears here more violent and provocative than say, the word '[email protected]*k'.
Hope you get to wash the muck out of your life sometime ;)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Cute mucking poem. Nice quick poem with one direct point. Life sometimes is mucked up!
You said it best! :-)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Mucked up! Made me smile. Love it! Nice job! -:3 )~~~

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This actually made me laugh - I like your play on words. There are a few typos that are easily fixed but best of luck in the contest. Very creative and succinct. Thank you for sharing your talent.
Light,
Siddartha


Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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