Spin-off Phase~ Bhuyanshi Talukdar

A spin-off phase emerges,
Depression's dark dance.

Like swirling mist,
Emotions surge like tidal waves,
Lost in the depths of the soul.

Reviews

[Pax]

I always love. Short piece like this, it says so much with such few words. It's like a build up world for you to expanse your expressive feelings. This is just how we are, poets of the same kind I guess, we feel you as we feel ourselve in this words, I on the other hand feels this so much, the dance and the music of depression, more or less it shakes your core now and then, all you have to do is dance until your tired and then you rest then go pick yourself up again and again, a cycle hard to break but bearable....

[Chris Shaw]

Touches the emotions strongly. That darkness seems all engulfing at times. Always thankful when the movement starts and there is a sign of lift off.

Brevity here with impact.

Chris