Edge of time

Follow your dreams to the edge of time

Never looking back

Yet remember

Where you have been

Who you once were

Follow the path of lessons

 

Drink from the river of tears

Ever flowing

Tears of change

Taste the bitterness it gives

The bitterness of pride

Found in the tears

 

Remember who you are

Walk straight the path

Worn deep in the ground

From the dragging of feet

Of hesitation still fresh

And stones of fear

 

The path becomes smaller

As understanding trends light

The faster you move

Less is left behind

Understand who you are

Who you were is no more

 

Creating your own way now

Never looking back

Remember where you’ve been

Who you once were

Who you have become

Follow your dreams to the edge of time

 

 

 

Reviews

[Sakshi]

Never looking back
Yet remember
Where you have been

From the dragging of feet
Of hesitation still fresh

The faster you move
Less is left behind

Love this piece! Some lines worth pondering upon even after one has finished reading! I read this twice, this one pulls me deeper and deeper each time!

Good work. Bravo :)

[spiritwind]

Follow the path of lessons
-----so true if we want to get anywhere instead of going around and around in circles
----good piece of work here

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I will always follow my dreams, a wonderful and lovable poem here! :D

[SHEEMA HUQ]

hope, transision and destiny, all addressed succsinctly, a nice write.

[Susie Q]

Inspiring and thought provoking.

[Mary]

a very inspiring write. It's important to remember our past, but also to understand that the past is not true, it's only our thought and opinions abut the past. And it is over. I love the ending...Follow your dreams to the edge of time.

[the_stoic]

this was literally like a dream with its flow .. I am enticed to ponder on similar lines and write something of my own . thanks for the inspiration !

[Katherine Enma Pineappl..]

This is such a beautiful piece. I like how it gives encouragement and promotes a wonderful future. I learned something from this piece.

I like every single one of your lines here and find them to be deeply poetic yet be as simple in meaning as can be. They are thought provoking and enlightening.

Well done

[Bobbie Coelho]

A Lovely poem

[Raven Starhawk]

I love the choice of color. The poem, as I understand it, basically has many avenues to explore. The paths we choose are ultimately what leads us through life and our eventual death. I hope I am making sense here. I also get from this poem that we learn as we go and grow as we learn. ^^

[Pencrafter]

I like this poem. To me, it expresses the need to make our own choices and be responsible for our own decisions. At the same time we recognize that who we are now is a mix of our own past life, our environment and lessons we learn from others. We can't go back, only forward in time, motivated by our dreams and desires as we make plans and do the best we can.