Prayer

Prayer

A Poem by walt whitman

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I felt God today;

I stepped on to my porch and

The Earth embraced my soul with

A warm breeze

It brought natures

Perfume along

The scents swirling around me

Until it reached my nose.

The sound of the leaves chiming

Against each other

As if He was saying

“welcome”

And I was home…

© 2008 walt whitman




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great expression! i like the effect of leaves chiming against each other like bells... unique :)

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Posted 15 Years Ago


this is lovely

I don't doubt it at all

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Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on September 10, 2008

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