Rendering

Rendering

A Poem by Angelheaded Hipster
"

the butterfly has a voice, it seems

"

 

"When I'm with you, the world melts away"

 

The words, the actions, the moves

behind your wanting, your desire

shimmers underneath a boyish grin,

innocent freckles begging to tell

the difference of boy and man

 

"I surrendered myself to you"

 

And I did, you know...my mind

may tell me to run like the wind,

(It doesnt, really)

but the body listens, the body

reacts to the touches, the kisses

of your truths that you breathe

into my ear at midnight

 

"I feel like a god"

 

You are, you are my god,

I look to you for absolution,

I look to you, to partake

communion, your blood

your body, consecrated

in your eyes, completed

 

My confessor, taking my sins

on my knees, awaiting the Eucharist

silent, begging, needing

 

"Clamabit ad me et exaudiam eum cum ipso sum in tribulatione eripiam eum et clarificabo eum"

© 2010 Angelheaded Hipster


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"He shall cry to me, and I will hear him: I am with him in tribulation, I will deliver him, and I will glorify him."

Great work! I really like this piece. When in love it seems that we do worship with our affection. I think you have described the ultimate pedestal here. Nice work indeed.
RLG,
Tommy


Posted 14 Years Ago


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Beautiful.. nothing more I can say...simply beautiful...

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Woah, someone has it real bad...

You are, you are my god,
I look to you for absolution,
I look to you, to partake
communion, your blood
your body, consecrated
in your eyes, completed

what can I say but WOW!!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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My name is Amber....my friends call me.....Amber, GA



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