Heat rises

Heat rises

A Poem by Rya May

                                                                    

  

 

                                                                                                    Ecstasy and lust

                                            My Body responds 

Your touch makes heat rise

                                   

 

© 2009 Rya May


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This I love! Very raw, very emotional...very evocative! The fact that the poem is "rising" upwards is a nice little touch. I love the simplicity of it. I've commented on this to others but I love short powerful poems. Very nice work!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

nice wording on the chemical reaction that ignites your flames :)

Posted 15 Years Ago


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