Let Them

Let them burn,

In the love of hatred

Let them crave,

For what is not destined

Let them desire,

For the non-existing truth

Let them wait,

For things invisible

Let them shout,

For no one will hear

Let them cry

For no one will see the tears

Let them trust,

For what they don’t know is

Unreal,

Plastic and

Lie.

Reviews

[GalaxyGhost]

I love this! It is a well-written piece and I couldn't find anything to edit. But I'm curious if the picture is supposed to be blank?

[iamshadowine]

Yes, I wanted the picture to be blank and thank you so much! :D

[GalaxyGhost]

Good to know!

[Ashwin Shanker]

Beautifully written analogies of thoughts with clever use of words. The condemnation is a very powerful one indeed. and it has been worded well too.

[iamshadowine]

Thank you :D

[Diamond]

Ohh! I so accept with what you conveyed in this poem. I do agree and believe that unless someone is ready to face a heartbreak, they can't attain the Truth or love and purity that is real. I like it.

[iamshadowine]

Thank you 😀

[Teddybearlee]

I love this, it leaves me wondering who "them" is, but I know someone that it fit perfectly for, so that worked out fantastic :) Let them!

[iamshadowine]

Thank you! :)