Untitled Love

Meh was bored, do five minute poems, so they're rough drafts but who knows. Young love or something like it

My lips can not form, what my fingers can rend,

For every day 

  your heart I'll defend.

From the setting sun, and the rising moon,

To a diddy all about 

  a fork and a spoon.

Every adventure wandered, and story I write,

Every memory stolen

with all of my might.

Will keep you in mind, in soul and in heart,

Until our days end 

  and our ways must part.

Then through Heavens breathe, and Death's woven door,

Will we fight and find 

  new lives to explore.

Author's Note

rough draft will remain as such but hey... who knows

Reviews

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

An excellent write, considering it was ONLY in 5 minutes! Good format and good rhyme scheme :)

[deeps]

I loved the second stanza, this is wonderful. I enjoyed the set up and flow. So very nicely done and written.