Haiku #1

Haiku #1

A Poem by Elyona

 

Vampires are the best
They are very cool to me
They now rule my world.

© 2009 Elyona


Author's Note

Elyona
It's pretty boring right?

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It's not really a poem. Maybe if you added more and been more specific about it.
Example-
Vampires are hidden in the shadows
Humans hide in the light
The sun kills us
The darkness kills humans
--and so fourth would be better. Just some advise

Posted 13 Years Ago


Nah, not boring...I understand it very well... I really do. I like your picture very much too...It gives me a lot of inspiration. What's it from?

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on November 9, 2009

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