I'm So Sorry!

I'm So Sorry!

A Poem by Totoro-Sama
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First Love full of Blunders.

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I'm So Sorry.
I keep hitting you, and running away.
I'm so Sorry.
I never mean the things I say.

I'm So Sorry.
I know, I understand why you've been ignoring me.
I didn't really think this through.
I'm So Sorry.
All your friends were right.
I really just didn't know what to do.
I'm So Sorry.
Just keep smiling.

You know, You were right. I've always been so uptight.
I'll go back to who I was before the fight.
Thanks for These precious memories.
They were just sublime.
...
... I'm Sorry.
I know I've always been such a hard person to get used to.
What can you ask for?
I never thought that this would "pull through".
... 
Hey. Wait.
You know ...
Thank You.
Thank You.
Thank you.
Up until now, 
Thank you for making me feel this way. 
For the first time.

© 2014 Totoro-Sama


Author's Note

Totoro-Sama
Picture Found in Tumblr.
I Am Quite New at this . . so Please go Easy On me.
Comment or don't. I would like some reviews though.

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Featured Review

I'm sorry
I would have written a review,
But there's just so much to do.
I mean, there's so many stories to read!
But sleep is something, I no longer need.
So I just wanted to say,
I loved reading this today.

I'm sorry
I would have given you a 100/100,
But as I sit here eating my bread,
I couldn't be more sad,
That this was all I had.
And I know your poem was a real treat,
And the fact that it made my heart beat.
But I wanted you to know,
Im rooting for you Toro, go! ^^

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Totoro-Sama

10 Years Ago

*applaud* ;w; Beautiful.
It's okay. I'm just glad you read it.
I hope you do well! Don't.. read more



Reviews

I actually really like it! It's easy to read and it flows well! Great job! :) I'm a huge otaku as well, and my last hamster's name was Totoro. ^^ I'm more of a writer than a poet, I actually am no good at poetry at all... *shakes head sadly* but this is a very very well written poem! Loved it!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Totoro-Sama

9 Years Ago

Thank you! Hamster c:
You know where the name comes from, ne?
The Ghibli Animation owo
Holly Greenleaf

9 Years Ago

Yes, I've watched it countless numbers of times. ^^
Totoro-Sama

9 Years Ago

^w^ Same here!
Very nice, amazing job. I like how it is written and the image it creates.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Totoro-Sama

9 Years Ago

Thank you for your praise!
Wow, you seem very apologetic towards this person. If you are truly sorry, don't repeat the behavior again that is how you show your truly sorry. Otherwise you'll be forgiven eventually by the person you have harmed a couple of times. In the end it'll turn out alright, trust me!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Totoro-Sama

9 Years Ago

xD No problem!
rainbow princess

9 Years Ago

Hey would you like to be friends? I thought i'd Add you!
Totoro-Sama

9 Years Ago

Sure! Add Away! I would love to be friends!
Well Amazing Job for the first time doing
a poem like this I need to do some Anime based poems
I've not done any in a long time.


thank you for sharing loved it.


... I'm Sorry.

I know I've always been such a hard person to get used to.

What can you ask for?

I never thought that this would "pull through".






Blessings. Benita/ kindred poet

Posted 9 Years Ago


Totoro-Sama

9 Years Ago

Thank you for your praise! Thank you very much, my kindred Poet! c:
Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

9 Years Ago

You're very welcome. I enjoyed reading your write. Blessings. Benita/ kindred poet
Totoro-Sama

9 Years Ago

^ w ^ I'm so very glad.
This is Amazing!!!! I really loved how your words flowed together in a perfect harmony and melody of emotions! You are a fantastic writer! Please, please, please write more!!!!!!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Totoro-Sama

10 Years Ago

Thank you for your praise!
Cristalle Kao

10 Years Ago

No problem! I enjoy your work, so keep it up!
I could just feel the emotions coming from those words.
The arrangement of the text is sublime and the smoothness of the words is simple marvels.
Keep writing.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Totoro-Sama

10 Years Ago

:D Thank you for your praise!
Lino Rie

10 Years Ago

You most certainly deserve it.
I'm sorry
I would have written a review,
But there's just so much to do.
I mean, there's so many stories to read!
But sleep is something, I no longer need.
So I just wanted to say,
I loved reading this today.

I'm sorry
I would have given you a 100/100,
But as I sit here eating my bread,
I couldn't be more sad,
That this was all I had.
And I know your poem was a real treat,
And the fact that it made my heart beat.
But I wanted you to know,
Im rooting for you Toro, go! ^^

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Totoro-Sama

10 Years Ago

*applaud* ;w; Beautiful.
It's okay. I'm just glad you read it.
I hope you do well! Don't.. read more
This is so sweet!The picture is from the anime kimi ni todoke.I can just picture an anime scene where an anime girl and guy say the exact poem in their dialogue.The words you use and the way it sounds as two people talk to each other made me feel really happy.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Totoro-Sama

10 Years Ago

Hahaha. I agree.
I have accepted that reality is far from anime.
But I cling to anime ev.. read more
Nariko

10 Years Ago

I will,since nobody really listens to my deep conversations.And we are kind of alike in this aspect.
Totoro-Sama

10 Years Ago

Heehee~ Yay!~
Wow! Very nice poem! Iike the way you put words into your creating!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Totoro-Sama

10 Years Ago

Thank you for your praise! :D

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Added on April 13, 2014
Last Updated on April 13, 2014
Tags: Anime-Inspired, Anime, Fantasy, Romance