5:39pm

so i'll keep my hands above the surface

to keep hidden how sweaty my palms are, 

keep you from noticing how nervous i still get

and i'll keep from looking you in the eyes,

for fear you'll see

how badly i just want to kiss your neck

you bite your lip and call me princess

and my heart melts

i need you,

right now

need you

now

you,

and only you.

Reviews

[Monica Garcia]

I love how you express desire so simple and naturally. I have been here before many times. Nicely done:))

[I Am Svetlana]

I do love the sense of urgency in this write! Such deep desire & passion waiting to be let go! You shouldn't be afraid of what you want. Go after what you want, fight hard to keep it. You won't get anything easily handed to you nowadays. Be it love or a passion, fight as hard as you need to cause it won't do you any good to give up if it seems other people are better at fighting than you are.

[JerryB]

Hey! Don't hold back, tell him exactly what you want and need. Just kidding around, this poem is a perfect showcase for expressing yourself by getting right to the point. Enjoyed.