Bruised and Barren

tell us why your chest echoes, why when you remove the band-aid the wound only seems to get bigger

do those childhood scrapes ever go away?

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[I Am Svetlana]

I really like the simple idea behind this. Though some scrapes can be either mental or physical, both can turn out to be very damaging to a child. I also think the question you put at the end should actually be in the beginning to start this piece off. It would give it a better flow and more power. Anyways, good write!