Faded into oblivion

Just words...!

That Rainbow

Used to come with Mellifluous voice

Turns into Phosphene.

Reviews

[The_Ancient_Rock]

Phosphene...
Sometimes we see things even with our eyes closed.
Certain images just remain.
The refraction of light through rain drops, so beautiful.
Enjoyed this piece. How you see color and give the reader a notion of sound, or a sweet soft voice.
Keep it up!
Take good care.

[mou]

Oh, thank you so much, dear poet...

[The_Ancient_Rock]

You are most welcome.
😃

[Neville]

Well they may just be words, but they are very fine words indeed my new found friend. All Good Things, Neville

[mou]

Thank you so much Neville for your time and words..and a pleasure to have you as my friend as well :)

[Neville]

My pleasure, as always.....N

[Mrudula Rani]

Change of heart or reality can alter our perception, when that happens what a let down, a spectacular Rainbow will be nothing but plain light! With just few words you painted a wonderful sensation here!

[mou]

Thank you friend for your fine analysis and those nice words..it's a pleasure :)

[Mrudula Rani]

It's entirely my pleasure.

[‘Thoughts In Time..]

Sometimes it’s our mind that makes us hear differently- we need to listen carefully with the heart- we need to protect our heart from unwelcome words and actions of the world, the heart can be a very noisy room... wonderful and thought provoking, makes one think .. enjoyed reading 🌹

[mou]

you are right..appreciate your words very much..and thank you for your sweet time and visit :)

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

My pleasure🌹

[Avia]

Honestly, I had to look for the meaning of some words, but this is really nice. Nice job :)

[mou]

thank you so much Avia for your time and words :)

[.]

All that once burst forth with colour and sweet song can in due course become colourless and invisible.

Reads like a metaphor for the passing of life and loves.

Nice work, Mou. Short and meaningful.

[mou]

Trying to do something different..Thank you Doodley for your time and those deep words..as usual one review for which I wait always with my every write :)

[Diane]

Nice! I agree with the last reviewer.

[mou]

Thank you for your sweet time and words :)

[Diane]

Welcome :-)

[mercy party]

Things that once were ,now are not.
An experience of seeing light that was never even light at all, maybe.
Things change, this poem presented the reality of that very well. Nice!

[mou]

yes you are absolutely right..Thank you for your visit and words :)