i spoiled it all...

i know i stand in line, till you have the time, to spend an evening with me. 214 days it be. i went and spoiled it all by saying something stupid. all my friends from the past are trash, except you. you are my last; and hope my final. but now i know that i'am in denial. i practice every day to find some clever line to make this all mine, but then i speak with you and it’s a crime. the clock is right, you fill my head and the stars glow above and then i go and spoil it all by saying something stupid, i love you.................

Author's Note

i know i ruined it all by those words............. some times you feel right, so right, saying those words but the receiving end may not accept them. mind your words. she is the flower!

Reviews

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Nice photo of a flower. Since a woman is considered as a flower, I think it is right to treat her like a delicate thing. Thus, a woman needs to be loved not hurt...

There is honesty in this piece. Nice piece.