happiness

happiness

because i get lost in emotions 

and those beautiful eyes

like cornflower fields 

happiness

because our hands touched 

only for a few seconds 

but your hand was warm

happiness 

because maybe it’s not fantasy

maybe this is real 

and it could really be

happiness 

because you and me

Reviews

[amomentforus]

I really like the sentiment communicated in this stanza:

happiness
because our hands touched
only for a few seconds
but your hand was warm

it really captures the sense of temporariness and the clinging to hope/love we can find in even the smallest of moments

[Chris Shaw]

Such little things can make a positive difference which can elevate our emotions . This is a lovely warm little poem Mabel. Nicely penned.

Chris

[Vol]

Mable Mae,
Nice, positive, safe, and warm contemplation of hope and love in the blender together getting ready for someone to push the pulse button and hold it down for a while.
Vol

[John the Baptist]

Normally, I don't review relationship poems because they all sound alike to me. This one, however, seems different, primarily because of the brevity and the way feeling is expressed within it. The openness and hopefulness are quite moving.