9:50 am

i once met a boy.

he was young

and so so powerful.

x

i once met a boy.

he was strong

and so so free.

x

i once met a boy.

he was hardened

and so so dangerous.

x

i once forgot a boy.

he wasn’t perfect

but he was just like me.

Reviews

[Amy R]

Oh damn, I totally loved the way you wrote this.

The last few lines was my fav,.,."i once forgot a boy.
he wasn’t perfect
but he was just like me."

Keep writing, and keep well...
-Amy

[jacob erin-cilberto]

And those were all the reasons she loved him...the maine one was he was perfect in his imperfection.
Dangerously bad and so enticing. I quite like this...and it is poetry...we get to fill in between the lines, just like it is supposed to be.
j.