I hate you too

end of friendship

you dont like me

I don't care

your just jealous

because i'm here and your there

 

just leave me alone

just don't say a word

I don't care to hear you

havent you heard

 

your not that important

you don't mean a thing

Its easy to dislike you

this feeling I don't care to contain.

 

Hatred it wrong

but I guess that doesn't matter

you didn't seem to care

my heart you can't tatter

 

you can go away now

you can leave me alone.

I don't care about you

I feel cold to the bone

 

yes you were my friend

yes i cared for you

but now you hate me

guess what I hate you too

 

Reviews

[Sunny]

wow i love the rawness of it. it's one of my favorite things about your writing it's sooo raw and pure, not watered down or sugar coated. keep the rawness, not many people have it anymore.

[deeps]

WOW! This is wonderful vent!

[The Water Queen]

I like this poem. The anger towards the friend that burned you is apparent and raw. The flow was kinda off and made it a little harder to read but all in all this poem is great.