Liquid Freedom

Liquid Freedom

A Poem by Huggy Bear
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Freedom that is produced through movement

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I can feel it
Cool to the touch
It slips thorough my grasp
I can't catch it
It moves with quicken pace
Its movements are like ebbs and flows of an ocean
I am mesmerized by its liquid movement
Relaxation and peace wash over me like a warm blanket
The world is blurred by its intoxicating presence
I reach out cautiously to capture this siren-like essence
I finally became free of this prison that is reality.



 

© 2010 Huggy Bear


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I love how you creatively used liquid movement for the poetic and lyrical challenge group. I was not expecting it to end like that and that was a terrific way to end this piece. Nicely done.

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Huggy Bear
Huggy Bear

Astoria, NY



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