Chapter one: Angels .VS. Demons

- - Part one: Crossed Territories

~CHAPTER ONE: ANGELS .VS. DEMONS

"Attack those Demons! We shall destroy them for crossing our Territory!" 

says the head angel. None shall cross into our dimension, well non that are evil. "Deyja you shall protect the amulet, now go into hiding protect yourself; the amulet will glow when it is safe," Says Ba. Running for dear life, avoiding the demons attacks, I call my friends Autumn and Jacob. They're shadow-hunters. 

"East of Saints Ville we are being attack by those ruthless Demons! You both must must go at once and assist us in destroying them" I say. "Ok. We're on our way go deep into the woods in the Cabin, there are weapons there, protect yourself.: Says Autumn. 

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I arrive in the woods, my senses tell me that I am now at least .5 miles away from the cabin. If there's one thing i've been learning my whole life is being a saint, my powers, protecting others(for when I become a Guardian Angel), & one of my favorites:survival. I took out a pocket knife from my bra, broke off a piece of branch and began to carve, Yes I know, I know what your thinking, What in Sams heck is an angel doing with a pocket knife in her bra. Well I have to protect myself not all angels are what you call "saints." Although as angel I should have my wings and be able to fly, but when i'm 16 I became a Guardian Angel like my Ba and Bapuji. As I sing the song of the Guardian Angels, my foot gets trapped in a rope and I was lunged upside down about twenty feet above the ground. Worried and dizzy I panic, screaming as the blood in my body makes its way to my head. I lost consciousness dangling upside down and passed out. 

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As I slowly open my eyes and slowly gain conscious I recognize the inside of a cabin. I sit up leaning on my elbows for support looking around I see some weapons hoisted up onto a wall, and in the corner, I see a figure just standing there, My vision is vague. Rubbing my eyes I see the figure moving closer. Do my eyes deceive me?! Its a Demon! 

"What are you doing here?! What the hell do you want!? 

"My name is Yulihaun, yes I am a Demon, but I swear I mean no harm, I ran away to get away from the destruction and danger the other Demons were putting upon your town." Says Yulihaun. He paused. 

"I am half Angel, half Demon. But after my parents were killed by the head Demon for marrying one another &giving birth to me." The head demon tried to put me with another demon family to raise my sister and I. They were going to kill me but because I was half demon and half angel they thought I was "powerful." Yulihaun  had continued. 

I got lost in his beautiful crystal water blue eyes, damn he was sexy. 

Finally I reply, "So because your half angel you saved me?. &whats that wrapped in a blanket over there in the corner?" I ask. 

"This is my baby sister shes only a month and a half old, her name is Yulianna. I vowed to protect her." 

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The consequences for befriending a Demon is severe. But after all I am a soon to be Guardian Angel, &it is quite obvious tat both Yulihaun & Yulianna are in need of help &that's a Guardian Angels job, to help & protect. I know that by me helping them will have me facing severe consequence but frankly at this point I don't care & I am willing to take that risk. 

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Reviews

[Elizabeth]

This seems really good! There are just a couple grammatical mistakes but I love the story so far! I like that you did not use a stereotypical "angel" for the main character! Nice work!

[Gem-muziqprincess]

Thank you and yes I do I see. I will fix them. but thank you I really appreciate it. As well message me please I have a question:)