D.E.A.T.H

early poetry

Darling,hold me...never let me go
Everything is perfect now....as long as we're together
And everything is perfect.....as long as you are here
The icey breeze it melts away with just a simple kiss
How can these wounds cease to bleed...with just a simple kiss...

Reviews

[Blade & Blood (The ..]

That's a neat acrostic. Very simple, yet it's unique. :P It's probably the mini story that you put into it, when acrostics are usually made to describe the thing it spells out. Pretty creative, nonetheless. ^^

Ironically Yours, Blade and Blood