The Devil's Marker

The Devil's Marker

A Poem by Greyson Bergantino

The weapon I hold,
Drags along my wrist slowly,
Leaving my own art.

© 2019 Greyson Bergantino


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Minimalism can be deep, as you've presented here. Well done Halie O'Harriet. Kudos.
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Noting title; Devil's Marker.
One tends to surmise him to be the perpetrator.
You employ first person pronouns in each line.
Yet as you state in responding comment to LE Berry; this poem means a lot to me. Even with a little amount of words, this text speaks volumes in my mind.
I hear your volumes also.
This is you talking to you, that's a (Good Thing).
All poets do this through their writing.
Interpretation:
Your soul is bleeding too, and it is not in agreement with your ego.


Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Take your life back, and live it in joy.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Minimalism can be deep, as you've presented here. Well done Halie O'Harriet. Kudos.
Analytics:
Noting title; Devil's Marker.
One tends to surmise him to be the perpetrator.
You employ first person pronouns in each line.
Yet as you state in responding comment to LE Berry; this poem means a lot to me. Even with a little amount of words, this text speaks volumes in my mind.
I hear your volumes also.
This is you talking to you, that's a (Good Thing).
All poets do this through their writing.
Interpretation:
Your soul is bleeding too, and it is not in agreement with your ego.


Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

a cutter... damn, still feel THAT shivershake. And yes THAT came to my mind FIRST reading. And while the thought flow could encompass so very many flows ...sigh... first impressions DO grab and hold.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love this tightly descriptive poem which to me defines all types of violence. Very nicely written Halie O'Harriet

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Greyson Bergantino

5 Years Ago

Thank you, this poem means a lot to me. Even with a little amount of words, this text speaks volumes.. read more

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Added on February 25, 2019
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Greyson Bergantino
Greyson Bergantino

VA



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Someone who writes from the dark of their heart. Only 16, but my mind is older. My focus falls in poetry and young adult fiction! Father of "The Truth May be Painful" on Amazon! My Instagr.. more..

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