My Friend, My Magnet

It's all or nothing 

My love is rarely quiet 

I burst at the seams 

It is far too hard

To muffle my affections

I adore you so 

My friend, my magnet 

All of me is all of you 

What are we to do?

Reviews

[schlanks]

I love this. This is the overwhelm of being taken over by love captured on paper. Great on the first read and to keep coming back to. Thank you.

[nadia dmitri]

Thank you very much, I appreciate that :)

[Writergurl]

I enjoyed this, it's kind of like a pun or maybe a riddle,
poetic read, enjoyed.

[Em]

This is all the more powerful for being so short. It leaves the reader questioning in the same way that the narrator is. Good job!

[Kane Hagwood]

This poem, interestingly enough, reads like a riddle. Even so, it reads well, even with the meaning behind it being open to interpretation. This was an enjoyable, quick little poem.