Prison

prison is not always about handcuffs and law,you can be a prisoner because of your own thoughts or other's

They let me..... told me  i am free to go..
Dark... fear..sorrow... cry no more….
Take your chance grab it before any one knows
Here is your life coming... it's all yours
i ran to that open door & hit a wall
Moved my hands in the air feeling it but not seeing at all
I rush from side to side
&my breath is cut with a cry
Was all that nothing... was it just a lie?
UN seen threads got my hands hardly tied
And my soul is trapped...yes I can't deny
On my knees... raising my hands up to the open skies
Wishing I could find peace... wishing I could fly
Wanna be set free outta my own mind…
Wondering is it a matter of time or more like a life style
Prison of my own thoughts,my weak beliefs,my two faced lies
Should I ask them to let go or ask myself
Who has the key of my prison???

Author's Note

any grammer or spelling mistakes please be free to point at:) i want to improve

Reviews

[Moflo]

This was a very emotional piece with strong feelings being portrayed in the writing. There is some great desperation at the end, and the pacing rides through nice and smooth. As for grammar mistakes, it seems okay for now...otherwise, its nicely written.

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a prison for your mind..the worst kind..your descriptions were powerful and vivid ..nice work

[underwriter]

deep write! you have drilled write into the human psycie and the thoughts have spewed accros the page! i know that i can completely agree 100% with that poem! i allow my thioughts to control me faaaar to much. i dont take control of them as i should. very good write, well done!

[Gone]

This is a very good piece of work. Right from the start, I found myself fully engaged as your writing an my past connected. Reading this I found myself remembering the emotional and psychlogical jouney of my past. Awesome stuff.

[Nothing Personal]

Again enjoyed your message..As you wrote aside the title, prison isn't always physical. Liberation isn't achieved devoid of handcuffs and bars..The allegory was perfect and the rhyme nice..I liked the last line..Seemed kind of a desperate outcry..good job...