tear drops on your pillow

about a woman who is in a relationship and still feel alone:)

here i lay in your bed, trying to sleep

thinking of my passion that's so deep

i can smell you,thu u're gone u're still here

i move from side to side,nothing comforts me

u're here...u're gone...this pain is real

like a baby i cry my self to sleep

baby,those are tear drops on your pillow

those from my eyes will tell you

how painful to have you and still crave you

 those are my tear drops on your pillow

hope you'll feel them 'cause i can't tell you

i need you...i need you baby...i need you..

i need you darling

i'm a proud woman and all i've is my pride

i posses a broken heart and a tortured mind

feeel me...here i lay my head on your pillow

feel me...here i cry myself on your pillow

baby...those are tear drops on your pillow

those from my eyes hope they'll tell you

how painful to have you and still crave you

i neeed u...i need u baby..i need u...i need u darling...

those are my tear drops on ur pillow

i'm crying myself to sleep.

Author's Note

feel free to judge, point out mistakes

Reviews

[Stephen]

First off, I hate seeing angels get cried and second off, am not sure what kinda love it is where the pain comes but still reflects the beauty of love. He gives her pain but she wants him, needs him, I know you've tried to express there that she loved him much so she's not ready to live without him but what about him? Today he has brought tears in her beautiful eyes that dripping down on the white smooth pillows but she didn't care and tomorrow he'll brought tears into another angel's eyes whose tears'd be dripping on his white pillows at the same place where the first one's fallen down.

In short, love's thing which's immortal and humans want more, more and more, no matter how painful a love could be or how gratifying a love could be...but they want love cause they make sins and sins take humans to a wicked game where humans played sinful games dancing all the night with or without pain (depends on the humans, cause there's hardly the good ones left in the world)

I adore this beautiful poem. This poem's a combination of love, lust, faith, emotions and feelings of hearts. Keep writing!

[Ann Outlaw]

'I posses a broken heart and a tortured mind....how painful to have you and still crave you..." - beautifully written lines. I can feel this so deeply, I had to go back and read this a few times because I can relate, as I guess most of us can. The irony of being lonely together...This was a joy to read this morning, thanks for sharing.

[Seanne Tholltree]

it's very emotional