I wish I may

Tomorrow is the last day we will probably talk, lets talk slow

I will wear a mask of happiness because no one knows

no one knows the way i feel

no one goes past this heart of steel

 

somehow youve made it, past the wall

today will be the day i will reveal it all

in the middle of the crowd of tears

I will pull you away despite my fears

tell you my secrets once and for all

and you will be surprised and let me fall

 

or will you agree and take me by the hand

spin me around until my feet do land

that day can end in smiles

that could go for miles

 

that was yesterday

the words i wish i could say

are left hanging at my lips

as you fall through my fingertips

so you go out and be someone

ill stay here and wait for the sun

 

Ill spend forever wishing you were mine

passing through men to pass the time

none will ever be like the one i found

I will live my life without a sound

I will live my life going day by day

wondering what would happen if i did say:

 

"I love you, inside out,

I couldnt live, without a doubt

I  love your smile, the way you laugh

I have loved you for a year and a half

when you touch me or when you walk

and who couldnt get shivers when you talk

and although i speak in awkward rhyme,

for you i would do it anytime."

Reviews

[WhoIsAmelia?]

great! love the rhyming, that was well done.

[.......]

This is so wonderful,
such an enjoyable read.

[Liz]

Awh! I love this! :)

[onceafaerietale]

amazing

[dare to fall?]

lovelovelovelovelove

[Butterfly Ninja :3]

i love it XD and i like that the balance is just right.. if that made sense :P

[Jess Holden]

mmm Love itt amazing rhyme :)