Sweet dreams

Sweet dreams

It’s just my sweet dreams
In which you love me
But my dreams are my life
You have to trust me
We won't know each other
Unless in unity
We are meant to love
I experience in my dreams
We both being together

Hopefully my dreams will come true

Reviews

[Jeannie Stevens]

Good write. And. . . .i hope you ve found or will find that love that you've dreamed of. I'm hoping you will.

[Arman]

your right.

[Megan]

I really like this poem. I think there is a lot of depth here along with a lot of emotion. You do a good job at showing the love that is felt and how the dreams are encompassing his life. Good job!

[Arman]

thank you.

[Messy Jessy]

That's a really sweet poem. Your writting is great.

[Arman]

thanks so much.

[Abhilash Hegde]

Nicely written. Has a good flow to it and well expressed!
Keep writing.

[Arman]

thanks so much. for nice review.

[Nourhane]

It's so lovely and so alive, i like it so much, keep going

[Arman]

that is ok. thanks

[chloe covington]

its really good continue on with writing it would be great if you could me with my stories as you have published books after all

[Arman]

thanks so much.

[A.marie.speaks]

Very lovely piece of poetry. I enjoyed reading this.

[Arman]

thank you!

[Vishuddha]

"I experience in my dreams
We both being together"
Although this is grammatically correct it would read better as
"I experience in my dreams
Both of us together"
Perhaps, come to me and let my dreams come true - ? or - let me take you in my arms and make my dreams come true - ? Makes it more personal, more connected to the loved one. Beautiful sentiment.

[Arman]

thanks for nice advice.

[ckane]

I'm not lover of love poems or love stories but this reminded me of a dream I had last night where Leonardo de caprio was my boyfriend and it was amazing, so yeah this poem worked for me today.

[Arman]

hahaha
thanks

[Sandra Nair]

Nice work, Arman. All are going to love this work. Keep doing!

[Arman]

Thanks dear Sandar!