Painful Love

The night my lover said yes

the night you made love to me
I was choking;
not because of your grasp on my neck
or because of the smell that permeated the air.
I was gasping for your love
yet your pleasure centers took over.
minute by minute
your breath grew heavier.
minute by minute
my heart sank deeper.

Reviews

[Chris Atkinson]

heart felt words, very well writen and excellent poem.

[ron]

the night you made love to me
I was choking;

I was gasping for your love
yet your pleasure centers took over.

minute by minute
my heart sank deeper.

You put so much in the words you write. So much emotion.